Mr. Harris, standing in the middle of the house that he bought 41 years
ago, that has lodged his large family through the neighborhood's
gentrification, kept thinking: All you had to do was knock.
Schmich continually makes it clear that the family was wrongly accused. She clearly state “No drugs. No guns. No dogfighting.” Although, she does not give her opinion in a straightforward way, the way she presents the facts makes shows that she does not feel that the family was treated fairly. Even the given title, Family shattered after raid, home loss, has leads this reader to believe a family is facing an undeserved tragedy.
Inside A Practical Guide to the Craft of Journalism, the author, Tim Harrower, provides these tips on how to write an editorial:
Keep it relevant.
Take a stand.
Attack issues, not personalities.
Don't be a bully.
Control your anger.
Write a strong lead and a solid finish. (270)
Harrower also tells his readers, "Base your opinions on facts - and present those facts. It's a delicate balancing act: If you leap to conclusions without providing facts to support them, readers will think you're just a raving loon. Yet if the facts crowd out your commentary, you're just rehashing old news."